Unit 320 (1.2) Scripts perpared for vocal performances

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Opinion piece on a serious, current news story. Political, environmental, social issues.	Presenter: Drink driving, everyone says they would never do it, however people still do. Do you realise how many teenagers die from drink driving. Driving under the influence of alcohol doesn't just endanger the lives of the drivers. It could destroy families, not even the drivers family. people need to stop. It's fine to drink, and to drive, but not together. You say you don't do it or that you don't want yourself or others to die, so think, you not drink driving could save lives that may have been lost if you had got into the car. Like i said, just think. It's selfish to drink drive, you will only be thinking about yourself and not others. 940 people are killed in great britain alone, from drink driving. 3681 injured, this is all within 1 year. 85,000 people are convicted. the majority of convicted drink drivers are male. 84 percent. Make sure you don't drink drive, because it will risk the lives of others.
Opinion piece that is fun, focused on entertainment or human interest. Evaluation of the Two scripts:	Presenter: The new best game for gamers has arrived, Fortnite, battle royal. everyone loves your good old call of duty or mario, however this game combines childhood with strategy and tactics. After my first time i was completely hooked. someone came up to me the other day actually and asked if i had played it. I basically live on it at the moment. most people see fortnite as a game, i see it as an enjoyable waste of time unless you are the best because you make money. seriously though it is an enjoyable game selling over 4 million copies in the uk alone. And its free! The drink driving script, i feel as if it had a good tone to get the point across. In the first half of the script i could have added a few more pauses and maybe emphasis on a few other words, for example "how many teenagers". Overall i think the script went well. The Fortnite script, the pace was too fast, i was trying to be excited about the game but instead you couldn't understand me because the pace was too fast. i could have added more pauses to give me time to think how i was going to portray the next phrases. There was good emphasis on a few words which were important. Overall i think it could influence someone into buying the game.